FAWM 2023 #9: Banjaxed

I've got music in mind for this, but can't get the demo sounding like what is in my head, so I'm punting. This one is meant to be heavier than my usual sound.

Likely wants another verse, as well (but maybe I replace that with the killer solo I can hear but not work out yet).

Lyrics

Chorus

(I'm) Banjaxed, broke down, busted flat, burned out:
I'm banjaxed, and all because of you.
Done in, and fluthered, gobsmacked, and gutted:
I'm banjaxed, ... and all because of you.

Verse

Just a lipstick note to let me know you were goin',
And as for why, I have no clue.
You ripped my world to shreds,
With a toss of your pretty head,
Now I'm banjaxed, and I don't know what to do.

Bridge

Too many questions never answered.
Too many lines never crossed.
Who really knows the mind of another (a lover)?
Who can tally all the columns of a loss?
© 2023 Tres Seaver